Lines for Spring Time

3 haikus, rooted in green

May 11, 2025

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I.

Stretching as dawn stirs

Morning chills still permeate

Early to rise now

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II.

The walls are talking

In floral conversation,

Petal singsong sounds

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III.

Dandelion wrist

Intertwined realities

Occupying green

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Alison Acheson

May 31

I so like how the images work together her! And how the are images of greenery that we--or maybe I should speak for myself!--might pass by any day. And this makes me pause for morning sun, blank and cool, and the petal singsong! Lovely!

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Thanks Alison, I'm glad that the lines combined with the photos evoked such a feeling in you. Thanks for reading!

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